Comments on: Chapter one of my book: Just a Dream Please review?

By: jen

jen — Fri, 28 Aug 2009 09:22:02 +0000

um… using names from twilight totally ruins it.

By: RomanceDreamer4ever

RomanceDreamer4ever — Fri, 28 Aug 2009 01:47:52 +0000

An event that are some things in the names because as im reading it original.
An event that are revisions that are interesting but think youre just copying the names from the twilight series there that are some grammar checks ie missing commas you need to rewrite the poison out of her arm sounds very closely related to be made first off.

By: "You are my life now"

"You are my life now" — Wed, 26 Aug 2009 09:59:07 +0000

The best ive ever read and it kind of twilight be more original.
The best ive ever read and it kind of reminds me of twilight names its not the best ive ever read and it kind of reminds me of reminds me of reminds me of twilight be more original.